Final Lyrics

I finally managed to finish the lyrics for the song. I believe they tell the story I wanted to tell is apparent in the lyrics and it communicates a Folk pop genre like I wanted. My final lyrics are: 

VERSE 1: 

When I was younger I was taught

If I blew a bubble it would burst

If I climbed a tree it would fall down 

If I meet a stranger I should frown 

When I was 8 I broke my arm

On the monkey bars at the Killy Arms 

Then I turned 10 and my best friend 

Packed up and moved to Manchester

CHORUS 1:

And oh those days are gone 

Those easy days

Laughing at the park with all my friends

Wishing that the day will never end

And oh those days are gone 

Those easy days 

And now they've changed 

VERSE 2: 

When I was older about 16

I met a boy who was tall and lean 

He made me laugh and he made me smile

Now all thats left are these photographs 

Then I left school age 18

Ventured off to university 

Drank a lot and ate crap food

Writing songs puts me in a shitty mood

CHORUS 2:

And oh those days are gone 

Those easy days 

Drinking at the park with all my friends 

Wishing that the night would never end 

And oh those days are gone

Those easy days

And now they've changed 

MIDDLE 8 

La la la etc... 

VERSE 1 (SLOW)

CHORUS 1 TO END 

In this song I sing about the things I earlier mentioned in the timeline I made. I believe I tell a clear story throughout and show a clear journey through life. This is shown by having two different choruses where I sing about two different topics. In the first chorus I am young and I sing about playing in the park with my friends, this then transitions to the second chorus where I sing about drinking in the park with my friends. The different choruses help to clearly show a passage of time and assist in telling my chosen story.